Thread: Cute or Corny?
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Old Aug 02, 2011, 09:38 AM
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I have currently been working on a new short poem for my girlfriend, Mandy and I would appreciate some opinions on it before I give it to her as I haven’t written many poems for quite a while and I am only now getting over writer’s block. Do you think this poem is cute or corny?

I want to be the pillow that you sleep on
The blanket that keeps you warm
The sweet melody that sings you to sleep
And the dream that you see
Each time you close your precious eyes