That is very nice......it's always an appreciated feeling when someone gives something so personal of themselves to the other.

I had several guy friends when I was in college. One was great at poetry & wrote me a very sweet poem....another guy friend had problems with his hearing....difficult thing being a music major. I was there as a friend for him through his rough times & he wrote a magnificent composition while being deaf that he dedicated to me & gave me the score for it at the original composition workshop. I wasn't a GF sort of friend to either....just a good friend. I felt so honored that they would care that much to give to me from their wonderful talents especially being JUST really good friends.

I would imagine that your GF would appreciate such a special poem that comes from your heart.