Ok, here is my input:

Wi_fighter is a strong, independent, fiercely loving mother of two fantastic kids. She is both a terrific friend and a passionate lover (not that I'd know that personally...). Always curious, always willing to try something new, and astonishingly resourceful. Fitness and self-improvement are two big interests, as well as furniture refinishing, gardening, and animals. Though self-sufficient, would like to build a close partnership or friendship with the right man. I am hip, cute, and heck - I'm flat-out sexy. Blah blah blah...

Do you want to try to work any of that in?