Well, if you want honesty...I warned you.

Emotional seizures? No. This not an informative description.

Use periods. Fix your grammar.

Bipolar isn't a proper noun.

A personal story about a specific incident would be much more interesting and a lot less preachy and give a better description of what is going on in your family.

Opinion should not be italicized. I know a lot of people have an idea that an opinion can be formed on absolutely no basis but, they're not. You can't dismiss opinions like that. Opinions matter.

If I didn't know better, and we can assume your target audience does not, I'd be thinking, "this is just some foolish mom who watches too much Dr. Phil, medicates her kids because she can't discipline them and wants me to stop judging her poor behavior. Bipolar? Riiiight. The new ADHD."