I really appreciate all of the helpful advice This was my rough draft written very late one night after holding my oldest, while she was crying about how much it hurt her to feel the judgmental stares from strangers. I know it needs work. I, unfortunately, am adrenalin crashing, so I need as much constructive criticism as I can get. That's why I copied and pasted it from word to get the kinds of suggestions that you guys gave me. Thanks!!!