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Nicely done!
Did they say how long it needs to be to be sure to practice timing outloud if this is one of the criteria and make changes accordingly. If you have the time, adding something about the resources for help such suicide hotlines or counseling services on campus would be beneficial to round it out.
Be sure to practice speaking it outloud in preparation.
Good work and love the opening; the whole thing was well done, flowing beautifully!
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I can be changed by what happens to me. But I refuse to be reduced by it. -M.Angelou
Life shrinks or expands in proportion to one's courage. -Anaïs Nin.
It is very rare or almost impossible that an event can be negative from all points of view.
-Dalai Lama XIV
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