So I got rid of the examples and inserted "and now things are totally different, now I want to be loving and tender. Will you accept it or will you say that it is not timely? I do not know..." and in that shape my former teacher approved of the letter. I myself am not sure of the insertion. It is not about the manipulativeness - I am not being manipulative, I am telling the truth that I WANT to be loving (which does not mean I am), so it is water-tight truth-wise, I am just thinking that it may be too much.

What do you guys think?