"Bringing together Yard and Home maintenance to bring you ease of mind and a quality experience."
This phrase contains the verb "bring" twice. To improve on this, I suggest
"Bringing together Yard and Home maintenance to deliver you ease of mind and a quality experience."
I am also unsure about "ease of mind" - I think it is either "ease of use" or "peace of mind". But you are the poet here so you would know better.
The red kitten is adorable.
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