I like what you did Trippin. I think the more you personalize it and taylor it just for you the better it will work. I have studied a lot of different religions and from what I can tell witch craft spells and prayers are really quite similar. They are both sumoning and directing energy towards something.

With witchcraft, they use a lot of symbolism to strengthen and reinforce it in their own mind. The chanting raises energy. Prayer people say always works better in numbers, the more people praying ..like they do with prayer groups the more energy raised. Speaking in tounges I think could be likened to chanting and raising energy. All seems a bit mysterious, but science supports a lot of our ideas about energy as well.

There are some fun things you can try with energy. Placing various rocks on a large table or floor, close your eyes and use your hand to scan over them, eventually you will be able to find them with your eyes closed by feeling their energy. It feels like a soft warm fuzziness on your hand. Plants too. I used to do this when I was a kid.