Well the stress of the review is enough to ruin your day DH. But please don't feel bad about the lack of organization - it's just not something we were all given. I don't feel lazy for mine, just can't wrap my head around it all, and I get distracted with many things at the same time.

Your strength, one of many, is your writing. Even if you're feeling disorganized in your writing, it does not come across that way. I'm captivated by Angel in Black! I'm a slow reader because maybe my add maybe i have dyslexia idk, but I have to re-read things a few times quite often. The story, and the characters are awesome and vivid and it appears on paper/computer screen as though you effortlessly waved a magic wand and willed it to appear.