Sis, I have NO idea how I missed this post!!!!
So glad your review went well, you deserve some positive happenings in your life.

Don't sweat about the disorganization, not everyone can pull it off, and like was said above, it definitly does not show up in Angel of Black, you write really well, your story flows properly, and you use just enough adjectives to set the tone, without making me lose concentration....

You have so many great qualities, don't let the 1 area you struggle with get you down

Love you lots