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Old Feb 12, 2013, 10:04 PM
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Originally Posted by dubblemonkey View Post
...do you accidently contort into unfortunate shapes indistinguishable...?

mentally engrossed in discarded importance?...

ripped out of reality as it seems into reality as it also seems...leaving no mistakes!

no questions as if?...everything is known!
despite the unknown being the real reason for losing it?

searching for the gaps?
despite overwhelming pressure to avoid them!

prepared to die?....

just to feel something that matches your mind

and so what!

This is beautiful. Amazing. Sometimes I amaze myself by being able to feel so incredibly much that I make myself violently physically ill... and yet, other times I'm able to shut my heart off as if with a switch, complete, apathetic P.O.S, totally not phased by the outside world..

I loved everything you posted.. and.. you should put it all together, keep going. It's poetry.