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Old Jun 07, 2004, 08:42 PM
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I revised the sections as you recommended, I agree they are much better now and reflect what I was intending to portray even better.

The database section may still be a little awkward, but I've been mucking with two sentences there for so long without a break I'm not sure if I'm a good judge anymore.

I also didn't like "learned" but I wanted to get across that I "self taught" myself the subject so I changed that as well and I think it works better also.

For the heading I could have just changed it to "Database Creator" but I tried "Author" and I think it is either very good or very bad .

I made the revisions to both versions (layouts) but for now I think I will stick with the newer layout? Is that the one everyone likes so much?

I have to update these on the website now... I may put up just the one version or both... it'll be a surprise .

Thanks again

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