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Old Oct 23, 2013, 04:17 AM
Anonymous32451
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Originally Posted by IGotThis View Post
Oh- I wrote this that same night... When I am unable to dance, I write, so this is the other one I have.

A broken promise
A broken heart
I wish I knew
Just where to start

I've said it before
I've said it to you
I only make a promise
If I can come through.

I made a promise
That for only tonight
I would keep myself safe
I would fight that fight

No harm should have come
Especially to me
I broke that promise
I messed up, you see

It wasn't on purpose
I promise you that
But what does that mean,
since my promise fell flat?

A moment of distraction
Was all it took
I cut my finger
My whole world shook

It wasn't much..
It barely bled
But how can you ever
Believe what I've said?

A broken promise
A broken heart
I wish I knew
Just where to start


really like your writing style a lot

you should start a thread in the creative section just with your stuff in it as i'd love to read more