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Originally Posted by hankster
How do you know you smiled shyly?
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Because I do that a lot. I'm trying to explain that it was a nervous smile.
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The books on how to write advise us to show, don't tell. Don't tell us "shyly", this is first person, you can tell us what you were really feeling.
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I was wanting to cover for the embarrassment of having my glasses fall off, so I guess embarrassment.
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You wanted her to react a certain way, and that is pretty much the last thing any t is going to do, is let themselves be manipulated by us. That goes against all their training. But it doesnt mean they don't like us. Just that they're not dating us.
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I wasn't trying to manipulate her.