I think you've been too hard on yourself and thrown in negatively judgmental stuff an "independent" observer wouldn't:

"She is short in stature, and tends to assume a hunched posture, as if trying to take up as little space as possible."

No one else would presume to "judge" the posture; you might have rheumatoid arthritis for all they know!

I would show it to my T :-) I think it's great and would be "fun" to discuss.