[quote[if there were any english teachers i could pm what i have wrote already and get some suggestions....


</div></font></blockquote><font class="post"> You mean ..if there are any English teachers I could PM what I have written already, and receive some suggestions... ???

It's worth the effort to use good English grammar all the time to make sure you don't insert something grammatically wrong into a graded paper, imo.

I'm sure Candybear can help you. Good wishes!