Awww! I'm sorry! What is it that you feel critical about? The writing of it? Yes, it sounds like a child wrote it but like I've always said "Out of the mouths of babes."

As for angels... I'm not sure I believe in guardian angels because I sure didn't have one when I was little and needed one. However, I don't doubt that God watches me. Sometimes He's a long way off, but He's still watching.