Hi Jensitive,

Great poem!

I read it several times.
Interesting imagery.
Cool tempo.
It would be fascinating to hear you read it. (If only that were possible. Poems always have more meaning with the author reading.)

I hope you write more! Please do share if you wish. I will enjoy them.
Have you ever thought of starting a poetry blog or something like that?

I've really enjoyed your poem and would like to show it to a few friends.

Thanks for the gift!
You truly offered us a gift!

With Admiration and Gratitude,
WC