Hmm.

While reading your profile, it stuck out to me how much you are insisting that you are different/better than other women. It definitely put me off reading that, as I do like to drink, I am not religious, but I have very strong morals and I stick to them: it was a bit offensive to read that. You could possibly reword things so that you aren't comparing yourself to other women.

You can state that you don't drink, and you can state that you're old fashioned, just like that: there's no need to mention other people.

Also, you make it clear that you are honest. But you aren't being completely honest in your profile. You say that you work in music journalism. But you don't, you volunteer. Reading it would make someone think that you are employed.