I think without compromising who you are, you could improve the photos and the blurb. The photos aren't great, could be more flattering.

IMO you say too much about music, get too specific. They get the idea, you could keep that part shorter.

You say you 'want someone I can communicate with, by talking on the phone or video chatting, for late hours into the night/early into the next day. '. Is that really what you meant to say?

What guy 'has his life together' but 'isn't concerned about working the next day'?

There's also no need to say as much as you do at the end about not cheating. I think you did that because of all the guys who told you girls cheated on them in the past. I'd remove that, too, and just say you are loyal.