Personally, I like it. It's detailed and honest, but not to short or to long. Dating is hard for most people, especially online dating I heard. If this site doesn't work for you, then move on to other sites. Give it some time though. I'm sure that you'll get a few replies soon.

And remember, post up at least one full body pic. Like I said, most guys are visual and they want to know that you're not lying about your weight since some women do just that. Not that you're doing that, just saying.