Very good and interesting story! Very eerie and the end and makes me want to read more about John.
I started writing a book awhile ago...a few years back but my laptop was stolen and I had no backup. I still remember the premise of the book kind of. It was a very complex plot that all downloaded into my brain in what seemed an instant. I really wish I would have finished the story or at least had the few chapters I wrote.
I wrote a song called "black widow petting zoo". Maybe I will share it sometimes but it's kinda embarrassing