Your placement of me.... I get to experience this too.....the response of my weird poem in the creative corner....I am now open to critique...
"The formatting of this poem was intriguing, but I don't think the content really justified the weirdness of the formatting. And at the end, I only had a sense of what it was all about, not details. So it's a weird poem about making a sucker's bet, with your inner riches at stake and nothing clearly to gain. I applaud the effort but did not experience any sort of understanding from the poem."
Especially as it isn't a poem...nor an attempt at a poem...or anything to do with an attempt at creativity....
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