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Mar 22, 2017, 06:55 PM
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Originally Posted by mc2ed
Your placement of me.... I get to experience this too.....the response of my weird poem in the creative corner....I am now open to critique...
"The formatting of this poem was intriguing, but I don't think the content really justified the weirdness of the formatting. And at the end, I only had a sense of what it was all about, not details. So it's a weird poem about making a sucker's bet, with your inner riches at stake and nothing clearly to gain. I applaud the effort but did not experience any sort of understanding from the poem."
Especially as it isn't a poem...nor an attempt at a poem...or anything to do with an attempt at creativity....
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I didn't read it as a poem either, but I think the style you use, with the frequent ellipses, etc., may have made someone think that it was. When you actually read it, it comes across as you expressing your current emotions. Not as an attempt to make a revelation or anything.
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