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Originally Posted by mc2ed
Your placement of me.... I get to experience this too.....the response of my weird poem in the creative corner....I am now open to critique...
"The formatting of this poem was intriguing, but I don't think the content really justified the weirdness of the formatting. And at the end, I only had a sense of what it was all about, not details. So it's a weird poem about making a sucker's bet, with your inner riches at stake and nothing clearly to gain. I applaud the effort but did not experience any sort of understanding from the poem."
Especially as it isn't a poem...nor an attempt at a poem...or anything to do with an attempt at creativity....
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I saw the following post from you on the creative forum in response to someone's critique of your "poem". I feel for you. I would be extremely frustrated if the same thing happened to me. I am posting your post so that admin can see your explanation for I think it was crystal clear.
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"because it isn't a poem....I didn't put it here...it was moved here...and it wasn't nor did it have anything to do with being creative...I don't want it here...and now to be found lacking in the poetry department...is insult to the layer of insult I felt when it was put here...
The formatting....I have a brain injury....those little dots....are so my brain can process...into vision...what I write....so the formatting too...has nothing to do with any attempt at being creative.... "
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I think that you made it clear that your writing is NOT creative, it is NOT a poem and it is NOT fiction. It is a post written from the heart that belongs exactly where you put it. I hope that you keep posting and I will look for them anywhere but the creative corner.
