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Originally Posted by Waterbear
Ignore if you will, but what about 'evoke the lasting'. If it fits what you want, that is.
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Thanks so much Waterbear, that's just the sentiment, but the line needs to be eight syllables to work for me (I'm a bit of a stickler for meter I'm afraid!) I really appreciate the feedback and that you understand my meaning
(sorry Dear T thread, please resume business
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