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Originally Posted by lucozader
Love your daffodil poem, Echos.
I like the sound of 'immortality' better, and I think if it fits what you feel better then you should go with it, as that's really the point of the poem after all. Having said that, the mention of the seasons seems to really fit with the feeling of the poem to me, too.
(and yeah, I know you asked Art, not me, but I thought I'd get involved anyway  ) |
Thanks Luc, your feedback is very much appreciated. I've gone with the second option in my little file of therapy poems (planning to print them in book form to give T when we terminate one day. I know, I plan ahead
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