I think it's the same as with your previous profile. Its good and It's shorter but still too long. Too many details.

People won't read it. It also has several cliches such as "breaking through concrete jungle" or "making other people laugh" or "hitting town on adventure" etc It seems like I saw same thing in many profiles when I dated.

You can say that you are looking for a long term relationship, you love to read non
Fiction, you enjoy your job with elderly because you can learn a lot from them and you enjoy helping others, and you have funny unique thing like you win competitions and you met many celebrities. That's all you need. Everything else share on a date.

Also free sites are mostly hook ups, so men won't care what books you read, they will only look at pictures. More serious men who do care what you read are on paid sites. But of course there are exceptions.