Well, to be honest, I've read that we have six seconds to grab a recruiter/hiring manager/HR person's attention with our resume, from the experts. I think it's great to keep tweaking it, improving it and working on it to get it just right. It's also great that you've gone to experts for their guidance and feedback. Formatting counts, your intro statement counts and should highlight your strengths. Perhaps keep getting the feedback until you are satisfied with the outcome...... getting overly anxious doesn't help much, but I know sometimes that cannot be helped if one is perfectionistic. I am a perfectionist myself!! But just keep working at it until you are happy with it. (((hugs))) and best of luck with the job search!!