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Originally Posted by TheLonelyChemist
Your writing is great, I cannot imagine myself writing like that. However, it MAYYYYYYY upset you, but I think the story should have had a plot. I know, there's a plot of depression, but an average reader may find it difficult to understand that the writer has a great potential. 
If I were you, I'd focus on character development. It releases emotions too. |
Yeah, that was just a short excerpt I posted here. It's from a larger story I wrote but that was my favorite passage out of the whole story. Thank you for your kind words and useful criticism.
I've written another excerpt but can't post it because of gore and possibly triggering someone. I could PM it to you if you'd like.