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Originally Posted by ArtieSwimsOn
Robert Brewer (writer's digest) tweeted about a poetic form that's new to me, an Irish form called Treochair. Variable number of tercets, 3-7-7 for the syllables, with lots of alliteration. My first try shortly.
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So like this? (TW for bad poetry written in 5 minutes)
therapy
tries so to traducify
the trauma of those thirsty
for love lost
leaving the lorn ones lonely
like the Veronese star-crossed
but too late
damage is done, goes undone
isn’t fixed, will be deadweight.