The only thing I disagree with is the short part. Thats a long list!
But I think you stated things well...*checking for I-statements* Yep...looks good to me.
However...I bet this will be met with hostile feelings simply because you are pointing out negatives. People don't like to be told their faults...gosh knows I don't. But I think all your statements are fair. You did a good job of keeping your "feelings" out of the facts. I'd listen to ya...
(((((Tomi)))))
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