Yeah, I know it's not very short, is it? Maybe I can pare it down to the bare minimum. I'll take a look-see. I already know it's going to be met with defensive if not hostility simply because that's the way they are, not to mention my bringing it up.

Do you think I could change the wording any so it doesn't point out "faults"? I'll check for that, too. If you've got any suggestions, I'm all ears.

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