Court, this really is well written! I know some people in university who can't write this well.

Just some technical things for spelling etc.

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This means though that the kids need appropriate teenagers to work with them who don’t use fowl language

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Should be "foul" instead of "fowl".

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I have a great working ethic, I maintain the honor role while taking honors classes which show that I can handle all the work thrown at me and not become overwhelmed or stressed out.

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Probably should be "work ethic" instead of working ethic. Instead of "show", it should be "shows".

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Taking the child care class next year would allow for me to increase my knowledge even more and see how much time, effort, and responsibility is really needed to be put in to be a teacher.

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Taking the child care class next year will allow me to increase my knowledge and show me how much time, effort, and responsibility is really needed to become a teacher.

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I feel as though this class, although will be a huge responsibility will really help me to get the experience I need for later in life to continue working with young children.

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I feel as though this class, although it will be a huge responsibility, will really help me to get the experience I need for later in life to continue working with young children.

.... I was once an English minor, never again. Honestly though, this is quite well thought out considering you only put 10 minutes worth of effort into it!

Sending good vibes, and I hope you get in!