Hey Sept!
Here are my thoughts as someone artistic and as a graphic designer by trade
First, AWESOME work at getting this together!! Wow. Its something I too want to do but not having a credit card limits me.
Ok, to the site.

1 - I think this would look better if the background was the same color as either the beige in the bar above, or the (dark green i think? or is it black) behind Tomi's Ts and Things.
2- The text here looks pink. Is it? or is that just my monitor? I think I would change it to a basic white, as it will look crisper and more sharp.
Those are my only suggestions. Everything else looks fab!
Oh, and I can do some logowork - so if you need help I can certainly give it a try.