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Old Apr 03, 2019, 01:43 PM
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Originally Posted by unaluna View Post
I love it!

But - i would shorten a version to perform at work. Like of the most colorful, meaningful lines? I like the windows air pollution line, demanding guests tipping low, etc.

And the chorus is great. I just have a short attention span anymore.
Thank you, (((Una)))! Yes, it was exhausting to write, but once I actually sang it, it wasn't so bad because it's a rap song and the lyrics go fast. But I will consider your words and if anything I'll cut out the last rap segment to save on time. But I'm hoping my coworkers will be thrilled to hear it!
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unaluna
Thanks for this!
unaluna