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15anddepressed
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Default Jun 03, 2019 at 07:34 AM
 
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Originally Posted by Poiuytl View Post
Could I share with you my latest poem?

Here I go.

The title is:

That Strange Green Vase

The strange green vase
Of strange green glass
You see through it
Distorted visions
Of a strange green past.

It's empty, yet can be filled
Like the drawers,
The full ones, the empty ones
Order, it suggests,
Must be wrapped in something soft.
It's breakable.

Where are you now,
You sweet green vase?
You were cheap, a giveaway
Yet hand blown,
Tender, thin walled, small,
And friendly.
That poem is really nice! I'm not super into poetry so I probably didn't catch some stuff but I like the metaphors. Thanks for sharing!
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