Great job so far! I would make a few changes to your opening statements. Most people are lazy readers... instead of “as a good listener” for example I would be direct and say “I am a good listener.” I would break up the sentence in the second paragraph and state “I am comfortable with technology.”

As others have said, I would be as specific as possible with listing my skills. That’s tedious to do, I know. And you’ve got a lot of experience. Try to be direct but not too wordy.

I think your resume is off to a great start. You present yourself as a positive person with great team work skills who also can work independently. Best of luck to you. I want to hear all about your progress. [emoji3590]