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Old Jul 28, 2019, 04:17 PM
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Originally Posted by atisketatasket View Post
I am really struggling with this story I need to hand in Tuesday for workshop.

It's the third draft. There was a definite improvement between the first and second drafts (almost a total rewrite since I changed persons and perspectives). This time, I feel like I'm making it worse, or boring.
Maybe if you left it for a bit and came back to it would help.

If you aren't happy with it maybe go back to how it was before?
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