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Originally Posted by StressedMess
I would annoy SD horribly within the first chapter. How many times can one mention the heat?
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As long as you didn't talk about the heat searing your heart, soul, or burning off the layers of built up internal scrub brush from years of empty meaningless encounters and blind living with its cleansing harshness sort of thing - I could probably go up to 3 mentions. I can compromise.