maybe just point out the typos and incomplete sentences. let the grammatical errors slide, because people tend to get huffy about them.
or maybe - mention that you've read the book, say something nice about it (or even better - ask a question - ego boost to T!!) and then say you noticed a few typos and stuff if he wanted you to let him know? perhaps it's less threatening that showing up with a 20 page documents on errors?
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