[brannabruh101]

Hey all, so I've been doing a bit of writing in my spare time since I was just a little kid, this poem used to be my favourite.. I wanted to share it, (I know it's a little cheesy but it's old, I was probably about 14 and undiagnosed, I'm 16 now)

She sits at her bed, her mind running free.
Alone with her thoughts, it's dangerous, you see.
Because her mind is different, it's plagued with disgust.
The same people she loves, she finds hard to trust.
'You know they don't care,' the voice within would say,
'You're stupid, you're worthless, you should just run away.'
Perceptions are changed, Everyone is evil.
The actions that follow may seem uncivil.
But to the girl it's how she copes,
When she's by herself with no pride or no hope.
What she did is a desperate act,
To kill the voice that always attacks.
It's hard to understand unless you've been there.
Sometimes there are things that seem impossible to bare.
She sits at her bed, her mind running free.
Alone with her thoughts, it's dangerous, you see.

[allme]

Wonderful ...and what's wrong with cheesy? lol

I used to write a lot but stopped in my late tweens. I loved it, dunno why I ever stopped, it's such a great way to release those pent up feelings

Keep writing!

[brannabruh101]

Originally Posted by allme

Wonderful ...and what's wrong with cheesy? lol

I used to write a lot but stopped in my late tweens. I loved it, dunno why I ever stopped, it's such a great way to release those pent up feelings

Keep writing!

haha, aw thankyou! x

[jadedbutterfly]

Really liked this.... what a great description of how it feels
thank you for sharing

[GeorgiaGirl413]

thanks for sharing

[Luvmydog]

Wow, I really liked it. That was excellent, thanks for sharing. I was going to mention the two writing social groups that I belong to here on PC, but I saw that you were already a member of Writer's Block. The other group that I belong to, and that you may want to check out is called Poets and Writers of PC. I don't post much in there because my writing would take up to much space (I tend to write longer stories), but it might be another avenue to put some of your work. In any event, if you check it out or not, I hope you continue to write and post in here. Loved it!!

[brannabruh101]

naw, thankyou guys