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Jul 12, 2014, 01:24 PM
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When my sky is bitumen black
and clouds obscure the moon, a solitary star whispers gently: 'Dawn is coming soon.' Not sure whether to add to it or leave it as above? xx |
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Jul 12, 2014, 03:45 PM
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I think it is very nice the way it is....very hopeful
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Jul 13, 2014, 03:05 AM
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Thank you Kaliope, that made me smile xx
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Jul 13, 2014, 03:41 PM
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Jul 13, 2014, 03:43 PM
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Yes I like it, thanks for sharing!
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Jul 13, 2014, 04:24 PM
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I can't remember the name for it, but there's a type of graffiti, mainly found overseas nowadays but was also found in the U.S. during the Revolutionary war, that is comprised of inspirational messages or poems. I'm a big fan of that type of art, and your poem reminded me of that.
Anyhow, I really like your poem.
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Jul 13, 2014, 04:26 PM
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Thanks for the lovely comments everyone, means a lot xxx
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Jul 16, 2014, 01:58 PM
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