[In_The_Darkness]

Very shortly ago... I wrote a poem. It was when I was down. I put it below.

The Darkness of Depression

The sunshine of my happiness,
Weaker than that of others,
Never as bright as it should be,
Never as right as it can be,

The darkness of my depression,
Leaves a scolding impression,
Stronger than my Sunshine,
Defeating the best thing that’s mine,

The darkness of my depression,
I can feel it reaching,
My very sunshine,
It is breaching,

The great darkness of depression,
The very best at deception,
It tricked me into thinking it was gone,
The mood change has just begun,

The Darkness of depression,
Step one – Anger to hide my weakness,
Step two – All happy memory gone,
Step three – Sadness explodes out like a bomb,

The Darkness of depression,
I do something to release the tension,
Physical Pain now becomes the object,
Mental Pain is part forgotten,

The Darkness of depression,
Made me shout at a friend,
She tried to help,
All I did was yelp, about me, nothing else,

The darkness of depression,
It won the battle,
It does every single time,
Soon, happiness will be mine.

Hope it's good

[DOWNINNATICK]

Very good poem mikkyhill.

[gamila]

WOW !!! I liked. it is so expressive , it describes almost everyone depressed but on the other hand it shows how you are inside , and how do u feel. Anyway if my guess is true then i share you your feelings cause thats what sometimes i feel when i am totaly depressed.

[sunrise]

Thanks for sharing your poem.

[Angel_of_the_Past]

Very nice, you are very creative.

[Fuzzybear]

Thanks for sharing, good poem!

[In_The_Darkness]

YEY! I'm creative

[Angel_of_the_Past]

Sorry, my comment was stated with genuine honesty. I liked your poem.

Sorry if I offended you-Angel