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Old Oct 03, 2013, 04:54 AM
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...the leap is a choice unchosen by the safest brains in this life business!

the atmosphere cold and brisk overcome by the psychoshere.... an entirely new dimension and the terminal velocity is reached
instantly I cannot!... I have less than no time to justify myself I fall contaminated with serious mental dysfunction and collapsed on my broken emotional back and terribly curled up falling so fast so out of control to my death....I fail to realise that I am not alone until I open my terrified eyes!

scared potentially meaningless bodies surround me and the agonising sounds of my own desperation are reflected back onto me and an accidental glance in the right and wrong direction I feel like I finally have the company I deserve and it took such imminent agony to force me to be so vulnerable...

and humanity has arrived within me

and I still expect to collide with some utter horrible catastrophe something more solid and
profoundly more final than what I fell with inside of me...

freefall instability

I am mentally ill

there is a safe place for me...

it has to be called life
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Old Oct 03, 2013, 06:16 AM
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Good Job, my poetry always sounds and looks like a 3 year old wrote it. (and so do my posts, I've had to edit this twice because I forgot words.) Keep on posting 'em!
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Old Oct 03, 2013, 06:26 AM
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poetry is timeless it is the slave of no age...

I delete many more times than I write...

the judgement is most harsh from the inside... the expression is most abundant and enjoyed from the outside...

...any personal adjustment or intimate understanding of reality is a gift a precious thing...

no time no age no feeling can interfere with true mental perception!
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Old Oct 03, 2013, 06:30 AM
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Thank you for such kind words.
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Old Oct 03, 2013, 06:34 AM
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you are very welcome
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