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Old Aug 08, 2004, 10:27 PM
itsjustme111 itsjustme111 is offline
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I live in a hole
A scary black hole
Its just deep, dead and cold
Its just me and my soul

I cry out for help
No one can hear
I try and get out alone
I come so very near

Everytime I fall
More pain arrives
I need help to get out
Listen out for my cries

Reach to the top, I want to
Fall again, I don't
Smile again, I've got to
Cry again, I won't

Please do not be angry
I do not fall on purpose
Just hold my hand and help me
Alone I'm purely hopeless

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Old Aug 08, 2004, 11:01 PM
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What a wonderful but sad poem. You have captured the feelings of depression that is for sure. Thank you for sharing this and baring your soul for us to see. It made me cry, because I know just how you are feeling.

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Old Aug 08, 2004, 11:45 PM
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That was such a beautiful poem! You just reached out and grabbed my heart. If I were able, I would have cried. I can relate to those feelings. You hit the nail on the head and I thank you.

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Old Aug 09, 2004, 01:58 AM
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Sorry, I did not mean to make you both sad or to cry. just how I feel; and how most of us feel here.
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Old Aug 09, 2004, 02:52 PM
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Touching, yet tragic (((((((((((itsjustme))))))))))))

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Old Aug 09, 2004, 06:03 PM
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No need for sorry. Was a good thing that your poem was able to reach that far. =)
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Old Aug 09, 2004, 09:40 PM
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I relate well to the hole. Very well written those very words are what I am feeling today and silently screaming all day. I relate well to the poem and it is well written-Chris

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Old Aug 09, 2004, 10:09 PM
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Thank you for letting me know how much you all relate. I figured many would. I am sorry to hear that you had a bad day today ((kris)), I hope you feel better tomorrow. You are all so supportive and I am grateful for this. Welcome ((dust)), its good to have you here; and any newcomers.
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