[fgh]

sometimes i look and see
the orange migth be just like me
when i view the orange rind
it displays just like my mind
rough and bumpy
sturdy too
wondering just what to do
with the mush i find within the skin
omg where to begin
the juice reminds me of the tears
the seeds of potential lost in years
picked from the tree
or left to be
it doesn't matter how far i fall
nah it doesn't matter much at all

nona

i liked your poem......do you know there is a creative forum for poetry?..more folks will get to read it if you post it there

[Mahali]

Hey I really liked your poem. Thank you for sharing it.

place

[fairygirl]

Hi Nona, I like your poem too. I saw that you wrote to Pammie, she will be thrilled. She used to have friends her own age when I worked at a middle school, but they all went into high school and Pammie went into hiding.

Fi

[fgh]

can't dig all the adult stuff in that forum and i'm doubting that they would care or undrestand it like the cluster here i'm not around much but maybe pammie can be around some too gets boring nona