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i wrote this poem and emailed it to my T. let me know what you think and if you can relate....
SAVE HER She is drowning. But the lifeguard only watches. "Save yourself," he muffles into the wind, "You have the power to swim to shore." She's sinking deeper, and desperate for a hand to reach out to her soul to pull her up from this deep blue hole. "If only he knew," she gurgled so softly, "that my legs are impaired. Then he would not have just sat and stared. For me to help myself, is only a wish, I need his strength to save my life." She went limp, and was sucked underneath. He watched her be swallowed to the world beneath. And there in the sand, wrote a message so clear: "Although your intentions were good and sincere, All she really needed was for you to SAVE HER. "
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I think it's both beautiful and sad. I think it's brave of you to send to her and should help you and your T talk about some important things. Take care.
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that was beautiful...
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What a wonderful way to express yourelf. I hope you and your therapist work on what you have written.
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