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Old Nov 10, 2012, 07:22 PM
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I never wrote a poem for my boyfriend. Until now. I thought it had to be some elaborate Shakespearean, Emily Bronte type thing. It isnt. Its simple. Some people ask themselves why they are in relationships? Why do we bother? Why do we try so hard? What is the point of all the tears and the heartache?

Its a heartbeat. Its a feeling. This should be in the Creative Corner, but I just wanted to share what love means to me.

If I wrote you a letter

And it floated away in the ocean

With the ripples of the horizon taking it

My words spread across thousands of miles

You are timeless my love

Endless like the waves

No thinking involved

Like the great love stories of old

Just a feeling

I know you are the one

If I wrote you a letter

It would say

Just that I love you

No other words need be said
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Old Nov 10, 2012, 08:04 PM
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Ah, yes ...
the power of simplicity.
I like it, PlatinumHeart.
I feel the feeling, like a comfortable old throw--it's "just right."
Thanks.
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Old Nov 10, 2012, 08:14 PM
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Ah, yes ...
the power of simplicity.
I like it, PlatinumHeart.
I feel the feeling, like a comfortable old throw--it's "just right."
Thanks.
Roadie

Thanks I appreciate it Roadie

Simple, straight from the heart, Glad you dig it
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Old Nov 10, 2012, 09:02 PM
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Very beautiful BLINKING EYES
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wonderful, thank you for sharing
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Old Nov 11, 2012, 12:41 AM
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Very beautiful BLINKING EYES
Thank you so much, I appreciate it
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Old Nov 11, 2012, 12:42 AM
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wonderful, thank you for sharing
Thank you so much for commenting and taking the time to read it
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Old Jan 03, 2013, 12:59 AM
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Just needed to read this again..........brings joy to my heart.
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Old Jan 03, 2013, 03:26 PM
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...and because you read it, so did I!
What a beautiful poem!
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Old Jan 03, 2013, 11:14 PM
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...and because you read it, so did I!
What a beautiful poem!
I am glad you like it! I had to reread it, it actually was inspired by the movie "Message in a Bottle". It was such a sad movie and it made me cry. Thanks for taking the time to read it and comment!
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