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I never wrote a poem for my boyfriend. Until now. I thought it had to be some elaborate Shakespearean, Emily Bronte type thing. It isnt. Its simple. Some people ask themselves why they are in relationships? Why do we bother? Why do we try so hard? What is the point of all the tears and the heartache?
Its a heartbeat. Its a feeling. This should be in the Creative Corner, but I just wanted to share what love means to me. If I wrote you a letter And it floated away in the ocean With the ripples of the horizon taking it My words spread across thousands of miles You are timeless my love Endless like the waves No thinking involved Like the great love stories of old Just a feeling I know you are the one If I wrote you a letter It would say Just that I love you No other words need be said
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Ah, yes ...
the power of simplicity. I like it, PlatinumHeart. I feel the feeling, like a comfortable old throw--it's "just right." Thanks. ![]() Roadie ![]()
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Thanks I appreciate it Roadie ![]() ![]() Simple, straight from the heart, Glad you dig it ![]()
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Thank you so much for commenting and taking the time to read it
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To see the world, things dangerous to come to, To see behind walls, to draw closer, To find each other and to feel. ~That is the purpose of life. |
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Just needed to read this again..........brings joy to my heart.
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To see the world, things dangerous to come to, To see behind walls, to draw closer, To find each other and to feel. ~That is the purpose of life. |
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...and because you read it, so did I!
What a beautiful poem! ![]() |
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I am glad you like it! I had to reread it, it actually was inspired by the movie "Message in a Bottle". It was such a sad movie and it made me cry. Thanks for taking the time to read it and comment!
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